This week let’s write an extraneous poem. I am of the opinion that a poem should have the precise number of words required, no more, no less, but we can still write about the extraneous things cluttering our lives. Post your hat on a cat in the comments below.
About Bartholomew Barker
Bartholomew Barker is one of the organizers of Living Poetry, a collection of poets and poetry lovers in the Triangle region of North Carolina. His first poetry collection, Wednesday Night Regular, written in and about strip clubs, was published in 2013. His second, Milkshakes and Chilidogs, a chapbook of food inspired poetry was served in 2017. He was nominated for a Pushcart Prize in 2021. Born and raised in Ohio, studied in Chicago, he worked in Connecticut for nearly twenty years before moving to Hillsborough where he makes money as a computer programmer to fund his poetry habit.
https://prolificpulse.blog/2020/08/31/reclaiming/
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An excellent portrait. Well done!
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Thank you!
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Crouched in the scraggly, wilted weeds
growing under the weathered, faded, splintered wooden fence
crouched a feral feline, dirty, bedraggled and thin.
A few hand painted ceramic bowls
of expensive, premium cat food
he had been trapped and transformed
into a floufy, poufy, prince of a puss.
Author’s note: I needed every one of these adjectives. Not a one is “extraneous.”
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Well done!
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The way to a man’s heart is through his stomach. Great work!
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