This week let’s write an unacceptable poem. The poem itself needs to be acceptable, assuming we want to get published, but the subject does not. Post your unacceptable response in the comments below.
This week let’s write an unacceptable poem. The poem itself needs to be acceptable, assuming we want to get published, but the subject does not. Post your unacceptable response in the comments below.
between pauses only long enough for breath
spewing lies and venom and discord
encoded in words used
coursing through our times
they want to order this place
like 1954 or 68 or 89
as unacceptable as always
like 1956 and countless other days
we are called out of silence
with our tools and talent
with chisels or ink or magnetic bits
to restate an acceptable thanksgiving
for all unacceptable times
for today and forever if needed
especially for those who have never thought to wield a chisel
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Love the “chisels or ink or magnetic bits” line.
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https://prolificpulse.blog/2020/08/26/meet-me-in-the-middle/ I mixed things up this week!
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Very nice.
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Thank you!
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Just posted my unacceptable poem: https://bartbarkerpoet.com/2020/08/24/unacceptable/
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