This week let’s write a practical poem. Some might say poetry isn’t practical so let’s prove them wrong. Post your pragmatic paean in the comments below.
This week let’s write a practical poem. Some might say poetry isn’t practical so let’s prove them wrong. Post your pragmatic paean in the comments below.
I just posted my poem here: https://bartbarkerpoet.com/2020/03/10/the-luster-of-gold/
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He is a Doer
She is dreaming up
all the grand qualities
in a man
He gives her an adorable smile
kisses her like a devil
passionately makes love to her
like there is no tomorrow
She pants and moans
thinks about their likely
possible future together
He looks at her with his puppy eyes
lays with her over and over
he says to her
I am labouring to give you a child
for our future
My Queen!
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This is awesome! I like the natural rhythm in this.
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Thanks Lisa! Both you and I are on the funny side with this prompt.
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An excellent description of the only practical use for men.
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Thank you! I had fun writing it. 😃
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Can opener
Pocket knife
Punch key
all things of great value
Until you need toilet paper
then
you have to be creative
Then again
why would you need it if
you have
nothing to open
nothing to slice
nothing to drink
complicated
it is
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Love it even if it sounds like Yoda at the end.
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Thank you! Ha
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Lol enjoyong this Lisa!!!
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Thank You!
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Wow! Challenge accepted
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