This week let’s write an aerodynamic poem. There are plenty of poems about natural flight so let’s get more specific. I want this week’s poem to be about flying in an airplane or some other human invention that gets us off the ground. We’ve only been doing powered flight as a species for less than 120 years so there’s still a lot that hasn’t been written yet. Post your flight of fancy in the comments below.
Air and water are fluids
The fattest bodies move
clumsy on land
streamlined in water.
The whale and walrus
the sea lion and seals
We are aerodynamic.
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Very cool! I wouldn’t have expected that to come from this prompt but that’s the beauty of prompt. Go where they take you, right?
https://jeanmarieolivieri.wordpress.com/2021/09/30/go-where-the-prompt-takes-you/
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I’m cheeky like that! Also, that’s the value of incorporating prompts into one’s personal writing regime. 🙂
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Fantastic and that’s me flying to a tee. I love this Bartholomew, excellent!!
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Thanks. Glad you like it.
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Will a non mechanical flying object count?
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No rules poetry. Everything counts!
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Right! I may have one.
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Can you fly?
By Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris
Response to Monday morning poetry word prompt
aerodynamics
Aerodynamically speaking
humans can not fly
Not like a bird on the wing
uses perfectly constructed wings
to fly
Speaking of aerodynamically speaking
that is to say
of a bird on the wing
a peregrine falcon is the fastest
flyer by far
Below the deepest blue of the sea
where nothing can fly
the many legged crustacean one
cooked oft in a pot is more aerodynamic
than a car
A car proposed to travel man around
could never fly
It’s aerodynamic’s designed by man
can not get it off the ground
not yet
But if a falcon can soar as a bird
on a wing
and a lobster can fly through the watery abyss
since a car is fashioned from all of these
then why oh why can’t I fly?
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Yeah! Where’s my flying car!?
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It’s in the works at the aerodynamically designed plant!! And I’ll sell you one (along with a piece of swampland in Florida) for a steal! Honest!
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I like your logic. Well penned.
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my flight in time would take me to places
I have seen but do not remember now
nor was it ever stored into my brain
as just a baby Germany was home
I have always wanted to go back there
but back to those days when parents were still
alive and well and siblings were alive
and well and I would have met my brother
a time machine is my wish for this time
to go back once more and know what I did
not know back then because I was a child
make it be back then
now is not the same
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Lovely ode to childhood memories. Well done!
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Thank you
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We always long for our origin and root.
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