Monday Poetry Prompt: Rescue

Posted by Bartholomew Barker ⋅ January 25, 2021 ⋅ 11 Comments

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This week let’s write a rescue poem. Are you the hero/heroine or are you the damsel/dandy in distress? Rescue this post in the comments below.

About Bartholomew Barker

Bartholomew Barker is one of the organizers of Living Poetry, a collection of poets and poetry lovers in the Triangle region of North Carolina. Born and raised in Ohio, studied in Chicago, he worked in Connecticut for nearly twenty years before moving to Hillsborough where he makes money as a computer programmer to fund his poetry habit.

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11 thoughts on “Monday Poetry Prompt: Rescue”

The stagnant air of evil’s lair
held me captive in its snare.
No clothes to wear,
naked,
bare;
A sinner without
a prayer.

T’was then my saviour came in glee
to finally set me free.
No need to flee,
I’m safe now,
see.
His love extends
to me.

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Posted by Dan Davis | January 27, 2021, 8:27 AM

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- Nice work. Interesting line break choices.
  
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  Posted by Bartholomew Barker | January 27, 2021, 4:49 PM
  
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Broken glass
still littering the floor
where earlier
the angry tried to take
our voice

a dissonant chord
fortissimo
held for too many measures

reach down
among those shards
and pick up the flag
and aright
what they did take

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Posted by Chris Clarke | January 26, 2021, 2:13 PM

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- Very nice. Love that middle stanza.
  
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  Posted by Bartholomew Barker | January 26, 2021, 5:25 PM
  
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Beautiful poem! “Save me in my dreams” perfect for this surreal time! Nice work. Lisa Baron

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Posted by browniepup | January 26, 2021, 9:25 AM

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My pal, my psychic cat
has gone,
‘mourning period is over’
she returns to tell me
time to rescue & befriend
someone new
or is he going to rescue me.

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Posted by purplestoneblog | January 25, 2021, 8:28 AM

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- Oh! Time to find a kitty ❤
  
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  Posted by Lisa Tomey | January 25, 2021, 12:43 PM
  
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- My condolences, if you were using your poetic license. Nice little poem.
  
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  Posted by Bartholomew Barker | January 25, 2021, 5:27 PM
  
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Save me in my dreams
as my muse slips in and prompts
help me remember
for when morning comes I will
see the sun and know nothing
of what was whispered.

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Posted by Lisa Tomey | January 25, 2021, 7:23 AM

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- That’s why I keep paper and pen on my nightstand. Nice work!
  
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  Posted by Bartholomew Barker | January 25, 2021, 5:28 PM
  
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  - Yes, I do too, but sometimes just moving to get them cause me to forget, but it’s worth a try. I have a scrap paper with little one liners on it of ideas that randomly pop in my head.
    
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    Posted by Lisa Tomey | January 25, 2021, 7:01 PM