
This week let’s write a late poem. As an habitually early person, it shames me to be a day late with the prompt. Forgive me by posting a poem in the comments below.
About Bartholomew Barker
Bartholomew Barker is an organizer of Living Poetry, a collection of poets in the Triangle region of North Carolina where he has hosted a monthly feedback workshop for more than decade. His first poetry collection, Wednesday Night Regular, written in and about strip clubs, was published in 2013. His second, Milkshakes and Chilidogs, a chapbook of food inspired poetry was served in 2017. He was nominated for a Pushcart Prize in 2021. Born and raised in Ohio, studied in Chicago, he worked in Connecticut for nearly twenty years before moving to Hillsborough where he lives and writes poetry.
Dare I say you’re late?
But wait oh wait oh wait
Who am I to judge
Could’ve given you a nudge
It happens to the best
Intentions the greatest
So worry not my friend
Next time a hand I’ll lend
LikeLiked by 2 people
Posted by Lisa Tomey | August 18, 2020, 7:55 AMAw! That’s sweet. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by JeanMarie | August 18, 2020, 2:18 PMYou’re too kind. Thanks for sharing!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Bartholomew Barker | August 18, 2020, 5:39 PMYou are gracious!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Cassa Bassa | August 20, 2020, 7:50 PMTemporally Challenged
I’m late. I’m late,
for a very important
and a not important
date,
meeting, appointment, show,
pretty much anywhere I have to go
My friends have to wait
because my on-time is late.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Posted by JeanMarie | August 18, 2020, 2:26 PMThat’s like my friend, Linda, who would always be an hour late, so we would tell her we had to be somewhere an hour before we really did. It worked perfectly and she never caught on.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Lisa Tomey | August 18, 2020, 2:41 PMHa ha! That’s funny that she never caught on. I’m generally some minutes late, not an hour late. Unless I am and then I call.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by JeanMarie | August 18, 2020, 2:45 PMVery nice little rhyme. Thanks!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Bartholomew Barker | August 18, 2020, 5:42 PMapparently different cultures have their own concept of being on-time. 😊
LikeLike
Posted by Cassa Bassa | August 20, 2020, 7:51 PMVery true Cassa! I just need to find the right culture. 🙂
LikeLike
Posted by JeanMarie | August 20, 2020, 8:55 PMHere’s a poem I wrote during the 2013 PAD which applies to this prompt:
I am an early bird and I am late
I am not driving an ambulance nor a fire engine. If I am late no one will die, no buildings collapse, no skies fall. Yet I weave through lanes as a snake. I curse my fellow men as obstacles. I panic as though drowning with no time to breathe.
Only the far reaches of the parking lot have space. Elevators mock my arrival from the highest floor. With apologies readied, I burst into the conference room.
Empty.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Posted by Bartholomew Barker | August 18, 2020, 7:26 PMSee, that’s the reason to do the PAD every year. So you can pull out old stuff on pretty much any topic! Nice job.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by JeanMarie | August 18, 2020, 10:30 PMWhat is “PAD”? Maybe Poem-A-Day? I am not familiar with that?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Chris Clarke | August 24, 2020, 11:58 AMCorrect. Every April a lot of us try to write a poem a day. In less than eight months you’ll be able to join us.
LikeLike
Posted by Bartholomew Barker | August 24, 2020, 7:43 PMDang! Like: “i panic as though drowning with no time to breathe”
LikeLiked by 2 people
Posted by Lisa Tomey | August 20, 2020, 3:53 PM“I weave through lanes as a snake.” I can so se that 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Cassa Bassa | August 20, 2020, 7:52 PMLate
Love is worthy of waiting
All the past tribulation and perseverance
lead to the great encounter
Love never arrives late
as life is never filled with bitter regrets
instead
it is full of reward for those who seek love
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Cassa Bassa | August 20, 2020, 7:50 PMA very hopeful sentiment. Thanks!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Bartholomew Barker | August 20, 2020, 8:55 PMThank you!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Cassa Bassa | August 20, 2020, 9:24 PM“It’s too late for that now.”
As I tried to engage the rocker switch under C117
Funny… those were the same words
She used when
The unbreakable
was broken
The end is the end
only when
it is the end
Thoughts
that are a luxury
of those who’s time
may be limited
but not gone
But it’s too late for that now
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Chris Clarke | August 24, 2020, 11:45 AMAn excellent meditation on that phrase. Well done!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Bartholomew Barker | August 24, 2020, 7:42 PMThere is always another perspective, but don’t trust me – I’m usually late 🙂
Sometimes, There’s Purpose in the Delay
The man sits in traffic
Coffee in his hand
And he grits his teeth
Another long day
The aggravation swells
And he grabs his horn
And tells the world he’s in a hurry
But nothing changes
He writhes within the delay – impatient
Never will he understand
It saved his life that day.
Had he driven a little faster
Had he arrived a little earlier
Had he not been delayed
That last morning hug with his son
The accident alongside the road
Firemen using the jaws of life
It would have been him
But he will never understand
He just drives by – and thinks it irrelevant
And he’s not the only one.
The young man in college
Roams about campus
And he grits his teeth in impatience
It’s another long day
For his ride is late – again
He just doesn’t have time for this
And the anger rises, not by his command
Until he sees her sitting under the tree
Reading poetry with a smile on her lips
How can a person be so carefree?
She looks at him and smiles
They start a conversation
And little can he understand
That this was meant to be
It saved his life that day
Had he left campus early
Had his ride come quickly through
Had he not been delayed
The life they shared together
Never would have been
And their young child
Who will someday grow to be a man
Who touches the world with his heart
Would never be
But he will never understand
He thinks it’s irrelevant
And he’s not the only one.
We writhe and struggle through the delay
And it happens every day
But we never know where it will save us
And we will never understand
We think we are in command
Of everything and everyone
But sometimes – in the delay
There’s purpose.
© Sumyanna
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Sumyanna | October 9, 2020, 5:18 PMNice little vignettes. I especially liked your use of the verb writhe. Good job!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Posted by Bartholomew Barker | October 9, 2020, 6:52 PMThank you very much.
LikeLike
Posted by Sumyanna | October 10, 2020, 7:28 PM