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yesterday, freezing winter seemed so far away now my chilly cubs refuse to play oh I believe in yesterday
suddenly, I’m not half the cat I used to be so many hares are white and hard to see oh yesterday came suddenly
why my toes are froze, I don’t know the sky is gray my cave is cold, so I search for yesterday
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Wow. Didn’t expect that!
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leopard crossing trail of snow through cedars, wolves’ eyes watch with hunger, fear
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Nice little Haiku!
flurries quietly touching noses while paws press crisp, crunchy, icy nature’s floor of wintry pad coolness warms the leopard’s heart
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This is very sweet Lisa
Thank you!
Excellent sounds in there. Well done!
Nice one Lisa.
Thank You!
I love that one Cassa!
Thank you JeanMarie
* The Leopard’s Prayer (typo error correction)
The Leopard’s Prayers
My ancestors in heaven snow king be your name
Your kingdom come your will be done in winter as it is in other seasons
Give me this day my daily prey and protect me from my predators as I also have protected my cubs
And lead me not into desolation but deliver me from famine
This is great and beautifully done.
Thank you..🤗
Lovely flow
Haha copy cat luck 😁
HEEHEE
Excellent adaption!
animals shiver in hovels, lone leopard pads through green, snow-chilled trees
Very nice.
Nicely done!
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yesterday,
freezing winter seemed so far away
now my chilly cubs refuse to play
oh I believe in yesterday
suddenly,
I’m not half the cat I used to be
so many hares are white and hard to see
oh yesterday came suddenly
why my toes are froze, I don’t know
the sky is gray
my cave is cold, so I search
for yesterday
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Posted by Steve Croft | January 10, 2020, 11:32 AMWow. Didn’t expect that!
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | January 10, 2020, 4:30 PMleopard crossing trail
of snow through cedars, wolves’ eyes
watch with hunger, fear
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Posted by steve Croft | January 9, 2020, 1:07 PMNice little Haiku!
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | January 9, 2020, 6:22 PMflurries quietly
touching noses while paws press
crisp, crunchy, icy
nature’s floor of wintry pad
coolness warms the leopard’s heart
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Posted by Lisa Tomey | January 7, 2020, 4:45 PMThis is very sweet Lisa
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Posted by Cassa Bassa | January 7, 2020, 5:00 PMThank you!
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Posted by Lisa Tomey | January 7, 2020, 5:31 PMExcellent sounds in there. Well done!
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | January 7, 2020, 5:01 PMThank you!
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Posted by Lisa Tomey | January 7, 2020, 5:31 PMNice one Lisa.
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Posted by JeanMarie | January 7, 2020, 9:59 PMThank You!
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Posted by Lisa Tomey | January 8, 2020, 6:13 AMI love that one Cassa!
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Posted by JeanMarie | January 7, 2020, 10:16 AMThank you JeanMarie
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Posted by Cassa Bassa | January 7, 2020, 4:59 PM* The Leopard’s Prayer (typo error correction)
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Posted by Cassa Bassa | January 7, 2020, 6:38 AMThe Leopard’s Prayers
My ancestors in heaven
snow king be your name
Your kingdom come
your will be done
in winter as it is in other seasons
Give me this day my daily prey
and protect me from my predators
as I also have protected my cubs
And lead me not into desolation
but deliver me from famine
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Posted by Cassa Bassa | January 7, 2020, 6:27 AMThis is great and beautifully done.
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Posted by NoblemanWarrior | January 7, 2020, 12:55 PMThank you..🤗
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Posted by Cassa Bassa | January 7, 2020, 2:08 PMLovely flow
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Posted by Lisa Tomey | January 7, 2020, 4:41 PMHaha copy cat luck 😁
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Posted by Cassa Bassa | January 7, 2020, 4:43 PMHEEHEE
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Posted by Lisa Tomey | January 7, 2020, 5:32 PMExcellent adaption!
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | January 7, 2020, 4:59 PManimals shiver
in hovels, lone leopard pads
through green, snow-chilled trees
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Posted by Steve Croft | January 6, 2020, 10:48 AMVery nice.
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | January 6, 2020, 4:45 PMNicely done!
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Posted by Lisa Tomey | January 7, 2020, 4:41 PM