This week let’s summon some warmth and write an August poem. Even though it’s six months away, we can still imagine late summer. Post your results in the comments below.
This week let’s summon some warmth and write an August poem. Even though it’s six months away, we can still imagine late summer. Post your results in the comments below.
Posted my August poem here: https://bartbarkerpoet.com/2019/02/11/august-in-ohio/
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idyllic
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That’s the best adjective to describe my childhood.
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On a Clear August Night
Anyone can see them, all the cliques
of stars. I look up, then down as I open
the Sears telescope’s tripod, see a fanlight
of quarter moon skim the river by Egans
Creek Ballfield, look at my hands, while crickets
sing their rough monotony. I want to see
Saturn tonight, before a cloud of mosquitoes
sees me in the dark, penetrates the OFF!
moistened by sweat. Scanning, aiming,
face flush with lucky dilettante surprise
I find it, alone, wearing its miracle of rings.
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Love the astronomy images here. Great work!
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Thanks. I thought about the poem last night and decided I was unhappy with some words (this preoccupation with words! To paraphrase Johnny Depp in “Pirates” — Poet). Happier with this:
On a Clear August Night
Anyone can see them, all the cliques
of stars. I look up, then down as I open
the Sears telescope’s tripod, glimpse a fanlight
of quarter moon skimming the river by Egans
Creek Ballfield, look at my hands, while crickets
sing their chirping monotony. I want to see
Saturn tonight, before a cloud of mosquitoes
sees me in the moonlight, penetrates the OFF!
moistened by sweat. Scanning, aiming,
face flush with lucky dilettante surprise
I find it, alone, wearing its miracle of rings.
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February has been cheating.
Inspired by dreams of August
the sun blazed, and wind swirled warm
in vainglory. But Nature knows.
Spring, the most capricious season
is still a month a way.
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Good!
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Vainglory! Love it!
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