Today’s prompt is to write a dodoitsu. This Japanese poetic form consists of four lines with the syllabic structure 7-7-7-5 and no rhyme, often concerns love or work, and are usually comical.
Here’s my attempt:
surrounded by men all day
in suits or construction hats
tossing pleasantries like lures
but I never bite
These poems are small, so feel free to post yours in the comments section.
Living Poetry 
On vacation, my true love
You enjoy my company
You’re all hands and goo-goo eyes
Until we get home
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Posted by it's nothing, really | August 3, 2015, 9:24 AMThanks for posting!
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Posted by poetsdoublelife | August 3, 2015, 10:55 AMMuch was know by the man
And simply did he answer
Confounded me I must admit
Jesus! He disappeared!!
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Posted by Jason Clark | August 5, 2015, 6:02 PMMy apologies for my first post! Here is 7-7-7-5
The truth in knowledge has this man
And simply did he answer
Confounded me I admit
God! He disappeared!!
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Posted by Jason Clark | August 5, 2015, 6:28 PMOkay…I messed up again…
And this is why I can’t wait to learn more 🙂
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Posted by Jason Clark | August 5, 2015, 6:29 PMIt’s all practice. Thanks for your attempt.
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Posted by poetsdoublelife | August 5, 2015, 6:35 PM