This week let’s write an attraction poem. Magnets, gravity, moths to flames, we live in a world of attraction. Post your attractive poem in the comments below.
(Bonus points for including the $50 word “cynosure” and making it sound natural.)
This week let’s write an attraction poem. Magnets, gravity, moths to flames, we live in a world of attraction. Post your attractive poem in the comments below.
(Bonus points for including the $50 word “cynosure” and making it sound natural.)
We circle each other
in a dance unseen
by world outside the veil
impenetrable
if we had eyes
they’d be locked on each other
at the cynosure of love
the invisible monopole
keeping us safe from time
forever
not by destroying it
but because it never existed
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Love the first stanza!
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Lovely, well done.
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Delicious in my thoughts
generated from the memories
of the bittersweet allure
when the juices of those beautiful
and fragrant beans
create the aromas which attract me
to the possibilities of a new day
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Well brewed!
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Thank you!
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What was it about you that caught my eye?
Maybe it was your gentle smile.
It reminds me of my favorite music video and makes me
perk up each time I see it.
Maybe it was those eyes that looked like the most beautiful blue waterfalls that were created.
I get lost like a stranger in the woods every time I look at them and you.
This isn’t just a physical attraction,
but maybe it should just stay that.
I heard that opposites attract, but I must repel.
It ain’t fair.
No, it ain’t fair at all.
My heart aches when I think that about how much my feelings for you hurt.
You’re like my brightest dreams I see at night.
I badly want to become one with the unconscious visions,
but I simply can’t.
I have many years of love stored up in my heart, and if you could be mine,
I’d make you my cynosure.
I’m confident that you would do the same.
Sadly, we’ll only ever do this in my dreams.
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Lovely and you score bonus points. Well done!
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Thank you so much!!
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This takes the reader on a wonderful trip through many facets of attraction. Well done!
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