This week let’s write an ethereal poem, more in the highly refined, delicate sense than the heavenly, spiritual sense. Of course, one can be a metaphor for the other. Post your rarefied effort in the comments below.
This week let’s write an ethereal poem, more in the highly refined, delicate sense than the heavenly, spiritual sense. Of course, one can be a metaphor for the other. Post your rarefied effort in the comments below.
https://medium.com/@nolchafox_14571/magic-fa0622c136e6?sk=f7dc8aaf12c467ca4b7ff09f217bda15
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Posted by crazy4yarn2 | July 8, 2024, 11:54 AMNicely atmospheric!
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | July 8, 2024, 4:17 PMThank you, Bartholomew!
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Posted by crazy4yarn2 | July 8, 2024, 4:25 PMGRIEF
Her grief made her lead
nothing stirred in her head
nothing thumped in her chest
As memories of him evaporated
in the ethereal threads of a love now dead.
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Posted by DanielleM | July 8, 2024, 2:29 PMLove those last two lines. Thanks for sharing!
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | July 8, 2024, 4:20 PM