This week let’s write a green poem without using the word “green”. That color has come to represent a lot in our language so let’s play with that. It’s not easy but post your poem in the comments below.
This week let’s write a green poem without using the word “green”. That color has come to represent a lot in our language so let’s play with that. It’s not easy but post your poem in the comments below.
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“Nature’s Bold Canvas”
In a land where the grass meets the sky,
And the trees stretch their arms, reaching high,
Nature’s palette is bold,
In the tales it has told,
Underneath the vast, open sky.
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Posted by Fay Ann Swearing | March 11, 2024, 7:14 AMA lovely limerick. Thanks for sharing, Fay!
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | March 11, 2024, 6:53 PMYou are welcome
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Posted by Fay Ann Swearing | March 11, 2024, 9:55 PMThis was published two years ago in Medusa’s Kitchen. I’ve always loved this poem.
Green Gate
I walked this path
with you before
the grass stained
footsteps green.
No gate, no barrier
could keep
our joyful laughs
contained.
But now the path
is overgrown.
Stillness makes
no sound.
Green gate
a guard,
a reprimand
to keep
our shadows out.
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Posted by crazy4yarn2 | March 11, 2024, 8:48 AMA fascinating poem but no points for this prompt. Sorry, it uses the word “green” twice. Still, it’s got me thinking.
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | March 11, 2024, 6:58 PMI didn’t see anything in the instructions about only using the word “green” once. Do I need coffee?
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Posted by crazy4yarn2 | March 11, 2024, 7:12 PMI definitely need more coffee, and one less migraine. Now I see where it says not to use the word green. Sheesh. My bad.
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Posted by crazy4yarn2 | March 11, 2024, 7:13 PMI’m a prompt stickler, even with great poetry.
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | March 11, 2024, 7:15 PMAnd I’m a rule breaker. What a team!
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Posted by crazy4yarn2 | March 11, 2024, 7:39 PMhttps://bartbarkerpoet.com/2024/03/11/its-almost-spring/
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | March 11, 2024, 9:57 PMRAINBOW MOODS
Violet comforts me with her sympathetic hand
Indigo sinks me into an ocean of sadness
Blue gives me freedoom to rise above
Green guides me towards hope
Yellow brightens evey cell in me
Orange infuses me with ecstatic happiness
Red captivates me with excitement
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Posted by Cassa Bassa | March 16, 2024, 8:22 AMA lovely spectrum poem. Well done!
However, I must point out it does not fulfill the prompt since you used the word green in the 4th line.
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | March 16, 2024, 12:39 PMTHE COLOURS OF NATURE
Grass, sky and sand
Are my favourite colours
Wherever I am
Freshly cut grass
Rain washed sky
Sunlit sand
They remind me of home
Far away
But closer than my skin
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Posted by Cassa Bassa | March 17, 2024, 8:19 AMGorgeous! Sensual imagery! Brilliant poetry!
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | March 17, 2024, 11:16 AMThank you Bartholomew! ☺️
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Posted by Cassa Bassa | March 18, 2024, 12:18 AM