Welcome to the Living Poetry prompt scene! Stop by on Mondays for more lovely ideas from prompt master Barker. This is a lovely poem. I especially liked the crispness, the colors, the scents.
No matter results
I will still step forth each day
with my head held high
results are really about
how I act in my own life
I just hope my smile
is written on my face
and natural to my soul
Finally posted my reaction to this prompt:
https://bartbarkerpoet.com/2020/11/06/stair-step-haiku/
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | November 6, 2020, 6:22 PMNot sure I’m doing this, but the tiny print said to post our poem in the comments…. Here is mine :).
Fall
Chanah L. Wizenberg
Chilled crisp air
carrying the sweet scent
of apple trees in bloom.
I walk through
the dried leaves
delighting in their crunch
beneath my feet.
I watch the leaves fall
from their trees
delighted by
the bright colors.
The reds, oranges,
and yellows.
In life and in death,
nature’s remarkable
work.
Taking a deep breath.
A good long sniff,
my nostrils fill with the
chilled scent of decayed
leaves.
I can’t help it.
I love that smell.
Rich, robust and
somehow, life-affirming.
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Posted by Pen Wize | November 5, 2020, 12:33 PMWelcome to the Living Poetry prompt scene! Stop by on Mondays for more lovely ideas from prompt master Barker. This is a lovely poem. I especially liked the crispness, the colors, the scents.
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Posted by Lisa Tomey | November 5, 2020, 1:27 PMThank you, Lisa.
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Posted by Pen Wize | November 5, 2020, 2:02 PMNice work. I love the chilled scent of decayed leaves and the last stanza highlighting that strange juxtaposition. Well done.
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | November 5, 2020, 5:34 PMLovely poem! I particularly liked the image of the wind.
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Posted by Pen Wize | November 5, 2020, 10:20 AMHi all. Here’s mine~: https://eastelmhurstagogo.wordpress.com/2020/11/02/daily-life/
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Posted by larry trasciatti | November 2, 2020, 11:13 AMLove the image of the wind there at the beginning. Very nice poem!
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | November 2, 2020, 7:43 PMThanks I’m really happy you like it
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Posted by larry trasciatti | November 2, 2020, 7:45 PMNicely done. Thank you for taking us on a walk with you.
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Posted by Lisa Tomey | November 4, 2020, 7:12 AMThanks
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Posted by larry trasciatti | November 4, 2020, 8:21 AMNo matter results
I will still step forth each day
with my head held high
results are really about
how I act in my own life
I just hope my smile
is written on my face
and natural to my soul
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Posted by Lisa Tomey | November 2, 2020, 7:33 AMLove it! Great attitude.
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | November 2, 2020, 7:41 PMthank you!
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Posted by Lisa Tomey | November 2, 2020, 7:50 PM