This week let’s write a poem about being deaf. I’ve always thought I’d rather lose my sight than my hearing but I think it would be much more difficult for me to write poetry blind than deaf. I’m eager to “hear” your comments below.
This week let’s write a poem about being deaf. I’ve always thought I’d rather lose my sight than my hearing but I think it would be much more difficult for me to write poetry blind than deaf. I’m eager to “hear” your comments below.
Not a poem, per se. But a beautiful thing.
Watch. Listen. Be moved. The ASL tells no much.
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Posted by Dennis | November 13, 2023, 7:25 AMIt’d be so cool to be fluent in ASL and to write poetry for it. Maybe when I retire…
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | November 13, 2023, 7:13 PMI’ve looked into learning ASL and/or hiring an ASL actor/actress to perform other pieces. To it in such a way that those without ASL can still “see” “read” what is being said.
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Posted by Dennis | November 13, 2023, 7:18 PMView at Medium.com
If you can’t access my piece, I’ll paste it in a comment.
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Posted by nolchafox | November 13, 2023, 10:54 AMLooks like it may not have worked. Here’s what I wrote:
Can’t Hear
Please knock on my door. Or ring the doorbell. As loud as you can.
The sound might pierce the emptiness you left in the world when you fell through a hole in the fabric of existence. Or maybe it was a hole in my eardrum.
I stuffed my ears with sorrow, and now it won’t come out.
I can’t hear you anymore. I am deaf.
Life and deaf.
I miss you.
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Posted by nolchafox | November 13, 2023, 10:56 AMNice. A tough prompt (for me, at least). The topic moves me but words didn’t come. They came for you. KUDOS for that.
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Posted by Dennis | November 13, 2023, 11:41 AMThank you, Dennis. It was indeed a tough prompt.
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Posted by nolchafox | November 13, 2023, 11:59 AMLove the ears stuffed with sorrow. Great metaphor!
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | November 13, 2023, 7:11 PMThank you!
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Posted by nolchafox | November 13, 2023, 7:29 PMI am Deaf
In a world of sound, I am deaf,
But my spirit, it knows no cleft.
With hands that converse,
And eyes filled with verse,
I find my own rhythm, bereft.
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Posted by Fay Ann Swearing | November 13, 2023, 12:00 PMMy apologies, Ms. Swearing, your comment got routed to spam for some reason and I only noticed it today.
What a great limerick. Love the last line. Well done!
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Posted by Bartholomew Barker | November 27, 2023, 7:07 PM