I tried something different for this week’s prompt. I pulled a list of the 1000 most common words in English and then randomly chose three: lady, island, essential. Write a poem which includes all three words and post it in the comments below.
I tried something different for this week’s prompt. I pulled a list of the 1000 most common words in English and then randomly chose three: lady, island, essential. Write a poem which includes all three words and post it in the comments below.
On this island, the lady’s essentials must be covered. On another island, it essentially would not matter what the lady exposed.
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Desert Island
We played cast up on a desert island,
with water and trees
coconuts, kiwi fruit, mangoes,
and wild goats, Crusoe had goats.
We were beautiful ladies, one dark, one pale
who wove artistic huts of palm fronds,
white sand was such a nice floor.
We lay in rags in our hammocks
in the shade
until the cloth wore out
By that time we realized what was essential;
a single shipwrecked young and handsome man
to share, two being too much to keep.
The game now complete, we reveled
in the isolation that led to being
excitingly known.
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Love that last stanza. Great work!
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Guess which island I want to visit. Thanks for sharing!
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With time, it is essentially all the same for both, coming or going.
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A Hope Garden
The lady in cargo shorts started planting
In the wee hours under the island moonlight
When the sun was up
I knocked to introduce myself to my new neighbour
Over a pot of Turkish coffee
I came to know that she planted
Wild Iris, Obedient Plant, Marsh Marigolds and Rose Milkweed
I can’t wait to see her garden bloom
It will be a luxury in an island
only sustained with the essentials
Imagine the pretty little pink, purple and gold blossoms
swaying in the pacific breeze
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I want to know why she started planting at night. Love the ending!
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Planting at night in island is better for seeds to take roots, the sun is too hot in the day
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Lovely work!
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If only words fell like iron filings
filling the page in amorphous clumps
with no order, polarity or direction
excitement
lady
gradient
running on
like an old computer room printer
out of control, printing a core
sandy
essential
chiaroscuro
a cantor dust
drifting
in finer and fin^h^h^h^h^h^h^h^h^h^h^h^h^h
island
gift
furry
My pen, a magnet
pouring forth an image
emanant
connotation
random
unconscious
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Very interesting. Love the first stanza.
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A lot of good vibrations in this poem. Nicely done.
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I really like the third line of the the one word verses: ‘gradient, chiaroscuro, then furry! Cute and humorous. I am imagining a shaded sketch slanting downwards, drifting onto fur, maybe, say, white ermine? Only, sadly, we don’t know what the sketch was a sketch of..something essential most likely, say, the ever essential, ever necessary lady?
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Here’s my poem: http://bartbarkerpoet.com/2021/01/11/boy-in-a-hospital/
It starts:
I woke up empty—
left eye swollen shut
where they pulled
out my memory
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Lady Liberty
on your lonely island.
Compassion is essential now
Is anyone listening?
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We are but you’re preaching to the poetic choir. Nice work!
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Well done and we are listening in the poet world. Maybe our time to speak even louder.
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A lady wrapped in furs
keeps away midwinter chills
dreams of tropical islands
where sunshine warmth bestows,
‘tis essential to the healthy mind
shedding the brrr from frosty window sills.
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Very nice. This is the time of year for tropical day dreams.
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Cute! 😁
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Something to be said for being warm and I would love an island in the tropics.
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Well said. Congrats!
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Lady Liberty stands
on Liberty Island
She has a history
and she has a purpose
Yes-the original meaning changed
What she has come to stand for
has now become challenged
As immigrants came to Ellis Island
they eventually became citizens
building many of the institutions
we have come to cherish
And now, hate is turning them away
How long will it be
before birthright becomes an awareness
that all citizens have a right to be
and let us ring the Liberty Bell
as a tribute to killing the cancer
that so many have festering in their
minds – not by medical means
but by ignorance and foolish pride
or is this confused
with leadership
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Hear! Hear!
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Thank you!
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Bravo!!!
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Thank you!
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What a great idea!
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Thanks. I’m expanding the list to 1200 words by adding poetic terms and the names of famous poets.
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