This week let’s write a new poem— a poem about the state of newness. And it should also be a new poem, don’t just pull one from the archives. That’s the whole point of the Monday Poetry Prompt, after all. Post your newest in the comments below.
This week let’s write a new poem— a poem about the state of newness. And it should also be a new poem, don’t just pull one from the archives. That’s the whole point of the Monday Poetry Prompt, after all. Post your newest in the comments below.
I pulled the tightly-stretched protective plastic off
thick and clear
with no air pockets anywhere
the display
four lines by 32 characters
monochrome letters on the film
rich black against a perfectly empty gray background
now revealed
stark and transparent
I look at this
the of smell of plastic
and cleaned circuit board
It is mine now
I plug the cord into the wall
and wait with anticipation
for something to come up on the screen
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Ah! The good ole days. Nice work!
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Such anticipation! Well done.
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Just posted my poem, https://bartbarkerpoet.com/2020/12/28/prescription/
Let’s rip the foil off this new year
like an unopened bottle of pills…
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Brand New
I decided to go one day, this day, without thinking, “What If?”
My high expectations led me to imagined assumptions.
My imagined assumptions led me to real disappointments.
I mean so what the guy I adored from a distance didn’t take the nonverbal hint?
So what I didn’t find a bag of money lying around?
And so what I didn’t get the one phone call that would change my life?
No, those things didn’t happen for me in the past days,
But they will happen for me one day.
As far as this day goes, I’m gonna let it finally be a new one.
#OWL’S ORB
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Very nice. Excellent last line! Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much!
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a new ones are good.
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Yes, each day brings new possibilities.
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New money coming
or so they would have you think
getting stimulus
in my world, means squirreling
putting away for a rainy day
then again, it’s looking cloudy.
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if you save for a rainy day, you will get rainy days….if you save for something fun or good, you will get something fun or good. honest. it’s true.
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Good points!
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Very nice. It’s been a cloudy year, hasn’t it?
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The Newness of a Year
Friday brings the newness of year 2021
like the babe depicts in many comments
so young to have shoes on the feet
so young to see what is ahead for us
so young to even make predictions
the scent of newness fills the room
like the interior of a brand new car
smelling like no other I’ve owned
making promises of a safe road ahead
but can it deliver, can this year deliver?
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Great point! It will be interesting to see what this year delivers One thing I know is that it will deliver more poetry inspirations, no matter what.
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Love the new car smell image!
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